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Wednesday, November 16th 2005

9:31 AM

Chapter 14

Adventure Starts

 

 

                Xylia, Becca and the guys went back to their own house while Jeremy and I were left behind. I don’t know what was wrong with Jeremy. He seems quite crazy because he kept denying the fact that he is Jeremy by saying that he is Prince Hansel Chesley Lee, Son of King Henry VI. Oh……I wonder where could I put a night in…if I can’t find a place to lay my head then, I’ll have to sleep on the road or somewhere else where there’s shelter.

 

Hansel: So……you are Fran, right?? (asked me)

Fran: Yes, Jeremy. Don’t tell me you have forgotten. (staring at him one kind) Are you well???

Hansel: I told you I’m not Jeremy. I’m Prince Hansel understand. Stop calling me, Jeremy will you.

Fran: Okay, Okay, fine Jerem…I mean Prince Hansel.

Hansel: Mind if you called me Hansel without the prince. (burst out laughing)

Fran: Okay, whatever, Hansel. Where shall we go????

Hansel: Somewhere over the rainbow……..

Fran: Hahahahhaa…….maybe we should find a place to stay.

Hansel: I need to find Jeremy’s house but I still can’t find it.

Fran: Jeremy!!! You really do not know where is your house???

Hansel: For last time, I’m not Jeremy. I’m Prince Hans…….(I continued the sentence)

Fran: Hansel Chesley Lee, Son of King Henry VI….(making a kind of funny face)

Hansel: That’s right! (messing up my hair)

Fran: Hey…..(messing up his hair too) watch that.  I think that we should ask somebody where is your house.

Hansel: It’s Jeremy house not my house.

Fran: Okay, whatever.

Hansel: Since you don’t have  a shelter too, come follow me (grabbing my hand and ran)

 

Jerem……I mean Hansel and me went to ask but none of them knows. I still don’t understand what’s wrong with Jeremy nowadays he seems to change. Anyway, at least he never changes into a bad person……hahaha……

 

Fran: Hey, I’ve got an idea. We should go to a place where it is filled with people so that it is easier to ask.

Hansel: That’s a great idea.

Fran: Come on, let’s go.

 

We reached to a place and went to see if anybody knows his house or not.

 

Fran: Does anybody know where is Jeremy Riller’s house??

 

Then there is a men telling John Riller that he son has come back. John Riller saw Jeremy and grab a hold of him.

 

John: You my little boy had betrayed me.

Hansel: I don’t have any father. (thinking) That’s why your son said that he doesn’t have a father. I’m not your son. I’m the Prince Of Wales, Prince Hansel Chesley Lee, Son of King Henry VI.

John: What are you saying son???

 

At that moment, Jeremy’s mother, sisters, aunt and grandmother rushed in. Jeremy’s mother said “ John Riller, you are not to lay hands on my son.”

 

Hansel: I’m not Jeremy Riller, I’m the Prince of Wales, Hansel Chesley Lee, Son of King Henry VI.

Carolina: Jeremy, remember me. I’m your eldest sister Carolina.

Hansel: I told you I’m not Jeremy Riller. I’m Hansel Chesley Lee and in the name of my father anyone who laid hands on me shall be hanged.

Fran: Jerem…..I mean Hansel is my friend, who dares to touch him. Bring it on.

John: Oh, I see a girlie is helping this boy who had betrayed his own father.

Hansel: Fran…., do you know that it’s quite dangerous to fight with adults?? (whispered )

Fran: I know but I can try.

 

John wanted to kill his only son, but at that time a man stopped John from killing.

 

John: Step aside aside!, young man, I want to kill this boy.

The man: Nope, this boy is innocent, if you want to kill this boy try me. (drew his sword)

 

He and John fought and he threw two swords to both of us.

 

One of the men: Oh, a girlie wants to fight with me. (looking at me)

Fran: Who are you to call me a girlie??? (saying fiercely as I fought with him)

 

John almost kill the man but Jerem….I mean Hansel and I managed to block him with our swords. John was defeated and the man bring us upstairs to escaped from John. There is a cart there and we decided to jump. The man called us to grab a hold of him and whoop……we went down. The man drove the cart as fast as he could.   

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